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Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 1/6

Grammar: Passive & Impersonality

By C2, the passive is not a rule about verb forms. It is a lever for objectivity, distance and focus — and impersonality is how you decide whose hand shows on the page.

Voice and person are choices, not defaults

At C2 you can form the passive in your sleep. What now matters is why you reach for it. Every clause forces two decisions: which voice — active or passive — and how visible the human agent should be — personal or impersonal. Those two dials together control a text's objectivity, its distance from the reader, and where the light of focus falls.

This unit treats the passive and its impersonal cousins as instruments of stance. An agentless passive can background a doer or quietly hide one; an impersonal opener (It is widely held that…) can lend a claim the authority of nameless consensus; a get-passive can drop the temperature into the conversational. The C2 skill is not producing these forms — it is choosing, deliberately, when the agent should stand in the light and when it should step into shadow.

  • The report was leaked to the press.Agentless passive → the leaker is backgrounded, whether unknown or protected.
  • It is widely held that the policy failed.Impersonal → the view is attributed to no one, sounding objective and cautious.
  • She got picked after the tryouts.Get-passive → informal, event-focused, warmer in tone.
  • The teacher approved the plan in March.Active → the agent is named and the sentence is crisp; sometimes this is the honest choice.

1. The passive as a focus tool (backgrounding, theme, end-focus)

The passive's first job is not concealment but focus. By moving the object into subject position, it makes that element the theme — the thing the sentence is about — and it pushes the agent to the end, or drops it entirely. Skilled writers use this to steer attention, not to dodge it.

What you wantStructureEffect on focus
background an irrelevant agentThe samples were frozen overnight.the doer is dropped; the procedure holds the light.
keep the topic as subjectThe bridge was inspected, then closed."the bridge" stays the theme across both verbs.
spotlight a newsworthy agentThe prize was awarded by the Queen.end-focus lands on the surprising doer.
Passive & focus — the nuance
  • Drop the agent when it is unknown, obvious or irrelevant — not merely to sound formal.
  • Keep the by-phrase only when the agent carries the news; then end-focus does real work.

2. Impersonal structures (It is said that… / One might argue…)

Beyond the plain passive lies a family of impersonal structures that erase the writer. They report opinions, beliefs and claims without owning them, which is exactly why academic and bureaucratic prose leans on them. They sound objective because no single person appears to be speaking.

StructureExampleWhat it does
It + passive + thatIt is widely held that the theory is flawed.attributes the view to a nameless consensus.
subject + passive + to-infThe theory is believed to be flawed.same claim, with the topic fronted as theme.
There + beThere is reason to believe the figure is wrong.hedges the claim; commits the writer to nothing.
generic "one"One might argue that the policy backfired.raises a view impersonally, at arm's length.
C2 subtlety — objectivity is a stance, not a fact
  • "It is widely held that" does not prove anything; it borrows authority from an unnamed crowd. Use it honestly.
  • Generic one sounds elevated and detached in British academic prose but stiff in speech — match it to the register.

3. The get-passive and tone (register signal)

English keeps two passives. The be-passive (was dismissed) is neutral-to-formal; the get-passive (got sacked) is informal, spoken and event-focused, often carrying a sense of something happening to the subject, for better or worse. The choice is a tone dial.

be-passive (neutral/formal)get-passive (informal)Tone shift
He was injured in the crash.He got hurt in the crash.plainer, more conversational.
The proposal was rejected.The proposal got knocked back.phrasal + get: distinctly casual.
She was chosen for the team last year.She got chosen for the team last year.warmer, event as personal experience.
C2 subtlety
  • The get-passive rarely takes a by-agent and never belongs in a formal contract or a laboratory report.
  • It often colours the event with luck or misfortune: got caught, got promoted, got dumped — useful for a personal, spoken tone.

4. Textual functions (continuity, cohesion, blurring)

The passive earns its keep across whole paragraphs, not just single sentences. It maintains thematic continuity (keeping one topic as subject), smooths cohesion (old information first, new information last), and — less admirably — it can blur responsibility when a writer wants the outcome without the owner.

FunctionPassive at workWhy it helps (or harms)
thematic continuityThe manuscript had been misfiled, then recovered.holds "the manuscript" steady as topic.
given → new flowThe award went to Vane. It had been created by his mentor.links old subject to new information smoothly.
blurring responsibilityMistakes were made and refunds cancelled.reports the error while naming no one — often evasive.
C2 subtlety
  • "Mistakes were made" is grammatically perfect and ethically slippery: the agentless passive can conceal as easily as it can tidy.
  • Cohesion improves when each sentence opens with the familiar and closes with the new — the passive is often what lets you re-order for that flow.

5. When to return to the active (✗ over-passive / ✓ active)

The most common C2 fault is not too little passive but too much. A paragraph in which no one ever acts turns foggy, evasive and lifeless. When the agent matters, when clarity is at stake, or when a report starts to sound like a cover-up, switch back to the active. Voice is a choice you re-make every sentence.

Over-passive ✗Active, clearer ✓Why?
It was decided that the club would be closed.The head decided to close the club.names the decision-maker; ends the evasion.
A review of the case is being undertaken.We are reviewing the case.shorter, human, and just as clear.
Errors in the scoreboard were identified.Our referee found errors in the scoreboard.restores the agent when the agent is the point.

6. Common mistakes (✗ / ✓)

These slips surface even in fluent C2 writing. Each is a failure of control over voice and person, not of grammar knowledge. Audit your drafts against every row.

Wrong ✗Right ✓Why?
It is thought that… It is believed that… It is felt that…Vary it: Many argue… The evidence suggests… One might contend…a wall of "It is … that" is monotonous and foggy.
There is believed to be several problems.There are believed to be several problems.agreement error: the verb agrees with "problems".
Having reviewed the file, the case was closed.Having reviewed the file, the prefect closed the case.dangling participle: a passive main clause leaves the "-ing" agentless.
The whole report was gotten finished by us.We finished the report. / The report was finished.clumsy passive stack; choose one clean voice.
The gate got left open, which was regretted by the caretaker.The gate was left open; the caretaker regretted it.mixing get-passive with a formal frame jars.

7. Putting it together (Model Dialogue)

A pupil drafts a note about the school website going down; a senior editor coaches the voice and the person. Read it twice and watch how each move trades objectivity for clarity — or hides an agent the reader deserves to see.

A:I wrote: "It has been determined that an outage was experienced by users."Two impersonal passives in one line — foggy and evasive.
E:Who determined it? If it was us, say so: "We found that visitors couldn't open the page."The active names the agent and clears the fog.
A:But the passive sounds more objective, doesn't it?The common C2 misconception: passive equals professional.
E:Objective, or evasive? Keep the passive only where the doer is irrelevant: "The site was restarted at noon" is fine — nobody cares who pressed the button.Passive is justified when the agent adds nothing.
A:And the cause?The temptation is "a wrong setting was introduced".
E:Name it if you know it: "A helper introduced a faulty setting." Don't let "Mistakes were made" do your apologising for you.Blurring responsibility is a choice — own it or reject it.
Test yourself
  • Why is "The site was restarted at noon" an acceptable passive, but "It has been determined…" is not? (In the first the agent is irrelevant; in the second the reader needs to know who decided.)
  • What work does the by-phrase do in "The prize was awarded by the Queen"? (End-focus lands on the newsworthy agent; the passive is justified because the doer is the news.)
  • Rewrite "Mistakes were made" so it owns the error. Which version would a teacher prefer, and why? ("We made mistakes." It is honest and human; the agentless passive reads as a dodge.)

Exercises (Alıştırmalar)

Choose the correct answer. — 10 questions, each one is marked instantly. Questions get harder as you go.

Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 2/6

Speaking: The Language of the Hidden Hand

Learn the vocabulary of voice and impersonality, then use it to talk about a time you deliberately made yourself invisible on the page.

passive (n/adj)
the voice in which the subject undergoes the action (edilgen yapı)
Syn: passive voice · Ant: active voice
"He put the whole report in the passive to sound neutral."
impersonal (adj)
not referring to any particular person; detached (kişisiz, gayrişahsi)
Syn: detached · Ant: personal
"'It is thought that' is a classic impersonal opener."
agent (n)
the doer of the action in a sentence (eylemi yapan, fail)
Syn: doer · Ant: patient
"The passive lets you drop the agent altogether."
agentless (adj)
(of a passive) with the doer left unnamed (faili belirtilmemiş)
Syn: agent-free · Ant: agentive
"'Mistakes were made' is a famously agentless line."
objectivity (n)
the quality of being neutral and fact-based (nesnellik)
Syn: neutrality · Ant: bias
"Impersonal structures lend a report a veneer of objectivity."
detachment (n)
emotional or personal distance from the subject (mesafe, uzaklık)
Syn: distance · Ant: involvement
"Academic prose values a cool detachment."
attribute (v)
to assign responsibility or a source to someone (atfetmek, yüklemek)
Syn: ascribe · Ant: withhold
"The passive lets you report a claim without attributing it."
accountability (n)
the state of being responsible and answerable (hesap verebilirlik)
Syn: responsibility · Ant: impunity
"An agentless passive can quietly dodge accountability."
obfuscate (v)
to make something unclear or hard to understand (bulanıklaştırmak, örtmek)
Syn: obscure · Ant: clarify
"Endless passives obfuscate who actually did what."
hedge (v)
to soften a claim to avoid full commitment (temkinli/çekinceli ifade etmek)
Syn: qualify · Ant: assert
"'There is reason to believe' is a careful way to hedge."
evasive (adj)
avoiding a direct answer or clear responsibility (kaçamak, geçiştiren)
Syn: shifty · Ant: forthright
"The reply was evasive: no name, no owner, no apology."
foreground (v)
to move something into prominence or focus (öne çıkarmak, vurgulamak)
Syn: highlight · Ant: background
"The passive foregrounds the result and hides the doer."
background (v)
to push something out of focus, into the shadows (arka plana atmak)
Syn: downplay · Ant: foreground
"To background the agent, she chose the agentless passive."
AGENT HIDDEN AGENT AT END AGENT NAMED "was leaked" "leaked by an aide" "An aide leaked it" Turn the agent up or down on purpose. Same fact; the doer fades or shines.
Impersonality is a dimmer switch on responsibility: you decide how brightly the agent shows.

Production Task (Üretim Görevi)

Talk about a real moment when you deliberately made yourself — or someone else — invisible on the page: writing a report, softening bad news, deflecting or accepting blame. Write 8 sentences and use at least 8 of the words above. Make your choices of voice and person visible and deliberate.

Style requirement — apply this unit's topic
  • Use at least one agentless passive to background a doer (the figures were adjusted), and say why you hid the agent.
  • Use at least one active sentence that names the agent, and contrast the effect.
  • Use at least one impersonal opener (It is widely held that… / There is reason to believe…).
  • End with a sentence on the effect: did the impersonality read as objectivity or as evasion?

Sentence starters (you can begin with these):

"There was a moment when I chose the passive because ..." "I wrote it agentless, so the agent was backgrounded and ..." "In the active version I named the agent, which ..." "To hedge the claim, I opened with 'It is widely held that ...'" "Looking back, the detachment read as ... rather than ..."

Değerlendirme öğretmenin tarafından yapılacak. (Your teacher will review your task.)

Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 3/6

Reading: The Vanishing Hand

Read the feature, then work through the five tasks.

Before You Read (Okumadan Önce)

Skilled readers prepare before they start. Before you read, think about these three questions (you do not need to write the answers):

  • Think of a public apology you have heard that said "mistakes were made". Did it feel honest, or did it dodge someone's name?
  • The text profiles a scholar of the passive voice. Do you expect him to condemn the passive, defend it, or something more careful?
  • Writers sometimes call a grammatical form "dangerous". Watch for the moment this text does so, and ask what danger it means.
How to read
  • First read: read quickly for the whole argument — what Vane thinks the passive does, and when he approves of it. Don't stop for every word.
  • Second read: track the passives and impersonal structures ("was leaked", "it has been decided", "it is widely held"), and the moments the writer shows the agent vanishing on purpose. Ask what each choice does.

Words to spot (from the Speaking section): agent · agentless · impersonal · objectivity · obfuscate · accountability

ACTIVE "An aide leaked it" PASSIVE (+ agent) "leaked by an aide" AGENTLESS "was leaked" the same event; the hand behind it fades from view
As a sentence slides from active to agentless passive, the doer dissolves — that is the vanishing hand.
The Vanishing Hand

For thirty years, Professor Adrian Vane has studied a single sentence type: the one in which nobody appears to act. "Mistakes were made," a team captain declares, and the hand that made them vanishes. This, Vane argues, is the quiet genius of the passive voice: an action can be reported while its agent dissolves into thin air. Responsibility is not denied; it is merely mislaid.

The obsession began, he says, with a single newspaper clipping he has kept framed above his desk ever since. A school had announced that "errors of judgement occurred and lessons will be learned," and the young Vane found himself transfixed less by the mishap than by its grammar: an entire apology in which not one human being could be located. Errors did not belong to anyone; they simply "occurred," as weather occurs, and the promised lessons would somehow learn themselves. From that clipping grew a lifetime spent cataloguing what he calls the architecture of the missing subject — the countless ways a language allows an event to stand alone, orphaned from whoever caused it. English, he insists, is peculiarly gifted in this respect, offering the writer a whole toolkit for the discreet removal of the guilty party.

The passive, he is quick to add, is no fault to be purged. On the contrary, in a laboratory report "the solution was heated to 80°C" is not evasion but courtesy, for the reader cares about the procedure, not the technician. Here impersonality signals objectivity, and the science, moreover, is placed above the scientist. The agentless construction earns its keep whenever the doer is obvious, irrelevant, or better left unnamed.

Instances of this honest impersonality are, he concedes, everywhere once one begins to look. A recipe that reads "the dough is left to rest for an hour" wastes no breath on who leaves it; a notice announcing that "the trip has been cancelled" rightly foregrounds the disruption rather than the anonymous teacher behind it. In each case the agent is either self-evident or supremely beside the point, and to insist upon naming it would clutter the sentence and irritate the reader. The passive, used this way, is an act of tact: it keeps the light on what genuinely matters and spares us a parade of irrelevant doers. Nor is its usefulness merely local. Across a paragraph, the same construction lets a writer hold a single topic steady as the grammatical subject, threading one theme through sentence after sentence so that the prose flows rather than lurches.

Difficulties arise, however, when the veil is drawn for less honest reasons. "It has been decided that your team is dropped" spares the coach the discomfort of owning the choice. Whereas an active sentence would name a person, the impersonal "it has been decided" presents the outcome as though it had fallen from the sky. The grammar is faultless; the ethics are murkier, and accountability quietly evaporates.

What fascinates Vane is how readily this same tact curdles into concealment once something is genuinely at stake. Clubs and schools, he observes, have refined the agentless passive into a species of quiet accounting, one in which losses are recorded but never charged to a name. A shop confesses that "the wrong price was charged"; a school admits that "the rules were not followed"; a club regrets that "some places had to be cut." Each formulation performs a small vanishing act, allowing the group to appear sorry while no individual ever steps forward to be blamed. The reader, Vane notes drily, is invited to be cross at a grammatical structure rather than at a person, which is a remarkably convenient arrangement for the person. He calls this the laundering of responsibility, and he regards it as the single most consequential — and, he does not hesitate to say, the most troubling — thing the passive does in everyday life.

History, Vane likes to remind his students, is often written in this evasive mood. When a report says that "a window was broken" rather than that someone broke it, or that "damage was caused" rather than who caused it, the syntax quietly reassigns the event to fate. The blame lands in the passive; the mess is counted without a culprit. Vane keeps a private anthology of such phrases, gleaned from notices and announcements spanning many years, and the pattern rarely varies: the graver the deed, the more diligently the doer is dissolved. Grammar, in his telling, is never quite innocent, because the decision to name or to omit an agent is always, at bottom, a decision about who may be held to account.

Vane reserves particular scorn for prose that drowns in the construction. Nonetheless, he insists the remedy is not to ban the passive but to weigh each use. Overused, it breeds fog: every sentence opens with "It is widely held that" or "There is reason to believe," and consequently the writing loses all footing. The reader, adrift, longs for one human subject to seize the wheel.

Yet the cure, he stresses, is craft rather than prohibition. The finest writers, in his reading, treat voice as a current they steer rather than a rule they obey, sliding from passive to active and back as the argument requires. They let the agent recede when it would only distract, and they summon it into full view the instant a reader has a right to know whose hand was on the lever. Such prose breathes: it alternates the impersonal calm of the passive with the sudden, bracing clarity of a named subject, and the contrast itself becomes a source of emphasis. A sentence that finally admits "the caretaker forgot to lock the gate," arriving after a paragraph of studied impersonality, lands with the force of a confession precisely because the haze has lifted around it.

An anecdote he tells captures the discipline. A young pupil once brought him a draft for the school paper in which a factory "had been found to have been discharging waste into the river." Vane crossed out the tangle of passives and asked a single question: who found it, and who did the discharging? The rewritten line — "inspectors caught the factory dumping waste into the river" — was shorter, sharper and, crucially, populated. Two agents had been restored to a sentence that had quietly erased them both. The pupil protested that the original sounded more measured; Vane replied that it sounded more measured only because it had been carefully drained of everyone who might be blamed. Objectivity, he observed, and evasion can wear the very same grey coat.

His advice is therefore simple: choose your voice. Decide whether the agent should stand in the light or step into shadow, and let purpose, not habit, make the call. The passive, Vane concludes, is neither villain nor hero; it is a dimmer switch for responsibility, and the writer's hand must rest on it deliberately.

Perhaps that is why Vane's students remember his final seminar less as a lesson in grammar than as a lesson in honesty. To choose the passive well, he tells them, is to accept that every sentence quietly answers a moral question as much as a stylistic one: whom shall the reader be allowed to see? A writer who reaches for the agentless construction out of laziness or cowardice surrenders that choice; a writer who reaches for it on purpose keeps it. The grammar, in the end, is the easy part. The harder discipline is the one Vane has practised for thirty years above that framed clipping — the daily refusal to let a convenient structure decide, on the writer's behalf, who is permitted to disappear.

A · Multiple Choice

Choose the correct answer.

B · True / False (Doğru / Yanlış)

Are these sentences true or false, according to the text?

C · Gap Fill

Complete each sentence with ONE word from the text. Mind the passive and impersonal markers.

1"It has been that your team is dropped" spares the coach from owning the choice. Doğru cevap: decided
2In a laboratory report, impersonality signals . Doğru cevap: objectivity
3Overused, the passive breeds , and the writing loses all footing. Doğru cevap: fog
4The passive is a dimmer switch, and the writer's hand must rest on it . Doğru cevap: deliberately
5Responsibility is not denied; it is merely . Doğru cevap: mislaid

D · Open-Ended

Write your answer in your own words. These questions are not marked automatically.

1. Vane calls the passive "the quiet genius" of the voice, yet also a "quiet danger". In your own words, explain how one form can be both.

Sample Answer"The same agentless form that usefully backgrounds an irrelevant doer — the technician in a lab report — can also hide a responsible one, letting a coach or captain report an outcome while naming no one. The genius and the danger are one mechanism: whether it serves clarity or evasion depends entirely on the writer's purpose."

2. Why does the writer contrast "the solution was heated to 80°C" with "it has been decided that your team is dropped"? What does the pairing prove?

Sample Answer"Both sentences use the impersonal passive, yet one is honest and the other evasive. In the lab report the agent is genuinely irrelevant, so dropping it is courtesy; in the drop notice the agent is a real decision-maker the reader deserves to see. The pairing proves that the passive is neither good nor bad in itself — only its use is."

3. Vane says the passive "is a dimmer switch for responsibility". Do you agree with this metaphor? Give a reason from your own experience.

Sample Answer"I agree, because a dimmer does not switch responsibility off but merely lowers how brightly it shows. When I once wrote 'the deadline was missed' instead of 'I missed the deadline', I did not lie — I simply dimmed my own name until it almost disappeared. The metaphor captures that the agent is still there, only faded."

E · Connector Hunt (Bağlaç Avı)

Find these connectors in the text — each one appears at least once: on the contrary, moreover, however, whereas, nonetheless, consequently, therefore. (You will reuse these same C2 connectors in the Writing section.) Note them down, then check.

Answers on the contrary: "On the contrary, in a laboratory report 'the solution was heated to 80°C' is not evasion but courtesy."
moreover: "…and the science, moreover, is placed above the scientist."
however: "Difficulties arise, however, when the veil is drawn for less honest reasons."
whereas: "Whereas an active sentence would name a person, the impersonal 'it has been decided'…"
nonetheless: "Nonetheless, he insists the remedy is not to ban the passive…"
consequently: "…and consequently the writing loses all footing."
therefore: "His advice is therefore simple: choose your voice."
Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 4/6

Extra Speaking & Practice

Rescue a foggy, over-passive notice by putting the agents back where they belong, then drill your instincts with 10 quick questions.

Speaking Task 2 (Restore the Missing Agents)

Below is a notice drowning in agentless passives and impersonal padding. Every fact is clear, yet no one ever acts: responsibility has evaporated. Your job is to rewrite it so that a real person owns each action — switching to the active voice wherever the agent matters, while keeping justified impersonality where the doer truly is irrelevant.

Dear Pupil, it has been determined that certain names were affected. Marks may have been recorded in error, and steps are being taken to ensure that the matter is resolved. It is regretted that inconvenience has been caused. Those who have been impacted are asked to be assured that the situation is being addressed.
Style requirement — apply this unit's topic
  • Replace the impersonal openers ("it has been determined", "it is regretted") with a clear human subject (we).
  • Switch to the active voice where the agent matters (we applied… we are fixing… we apologise…).
  • Keep a passive only where the doer is genuinely irrelevant, and say nothing evasive.
  • Write 6–8 sentences. Keep every fact; change only the voice and the person.

Sentence starters (you can begin with these):

"Dear [name], we're sorry to tell you that ..." "We recorded some marks by mistake, and ..." "We are now fixing this by ..." "We apologise for the trouble this has caused ..." "If your mark was affected, we will ..."

Değerlendirme öğretmenin tarafından yapılacak. (Your teacher will review your task.)

Practice Lab (Alıştırma Turu)

10 quick questions on the passive and impersonality. Each one is marked instantly. Questions get harder as you go.

Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 5/6

Writing: One Incident, Two Voices

Report the same event twice — once impersonally, once with agents named — then reflect on what the passive hid and revealed. Your teacher will review it.

Connectors that hold an impersonal register (Linking Words)

At C1 you learned formal connectors; at C2 you learn to pair them with the right voice. An impersonal, passive-heavy paragraph reaches for elevated connectors (nonetheless, moreover, whereas, consequently, however); a personal, active one uses their plain twins (still, also, but, so, though). Matching connector to voice keeps a register whole.

Formal connectorIts plain-register twinImpersonal example
nonethelessstill / anywayThe cause was unclear; nonetheless, action was taken.
moreoveralso / andThe server failed. Moreover, backups had been skipped.
whereaswhile / butThe report was filed, whereas the fault was not fixed.
consequentlyso / that's whyData was lost; consequently, an audit was ordered.
howeverbut / thoughSteps were taken. However, no one was named.
on the contraryno — in factIt was not ignored; on the contrary, it was escalated.

See the difference — the same event, two voices:

Impersonal / passive ✓Personal / active ✓
A fault was experienced on Monday. It has been established that a faulty setting was introduced during maintenance. Consequently, the website was taken offline for two hours, and affected visitors were notified. We had a problem on Monday. A helper introduced a faulty setting while doing maintenance, so we took the website offline for two hours. We then told everyone it affected.
Rule
  • Inside each version, keep one voice from first word to last. Do not let a get-passive slip into the impersonal version, or "it has been established" into the personal one.
  • Use at least 3 formal connectors in your impersonal version, and their plain twins in your personal one.

How to structure the task (Two-Voice Structure)

You will report the same incident twice, then reflect. The facts stay fixed; only the voice and the person move. This is the purest test of stylistic control over the passive: it forces you to prove you can foreground and background the agent on demand.

PartWhat to writeVoice to reach for
A. Impersonal versionthe incident for an official record (a teacher, the school log)agentless passives, impersonal openers, formal connectors, detached tone
B. Personal versionthe same incident told to a classmate or friendactive voice, named agents, get-passives, plain connectors, warm tone
C. Reflection2–3 sentences on what the passive hid and what the active revealedneutral, analytical — use the unit's vocabulary

Task (Görev)

Choose one real or invented incident — a missed deadline, a lost library book, a broken window, a spilled paint pot. Report it twice (impersonal, then personal), then reflect. Prove you control the agent, not the other way round.

WHAT TO INCLUDE

  • an impersonal version using at least two agentless passives and one impersonal opener (It is/has been… that; There is reason to believe)
  • at least 3 formal connectors: nonetheless, moreover, whereas, consequently, however, on the contrary
  • a personal version of the same incident in the active voice, with named agents and plain connectors
  • a detached tone in the impersonal version and a warm, personal tone in the active one
  • a short reflection naming exactly what the passive hid (which agent) and what the active revealed
  • at least 4 words from the Speaking section (agent, agentless, impersonal, objectivity, detachment, accountability, obfuscate, hedge, evasive, foreground, background)

EXAMPLE OPENERS

"Impersonal: It has been established that ..." "Personal: Honestly, what happened was ..." "Reflection: The passive version quietly hid ..."

Your Two Versions (200-240 words / kelime)

0 kelime

Değerlendirme öğretmenin tarafından yapılacak. (Your teacher will evaluate your writing.)

Sample Answer (~228 words) A. Impersonal version
It has been established that a fault occurred on Tuesday. The school website was taken down without warning, and it is believed that a weak setting was to blame. Nonetheless, the fault was fixed within an hour, and the relevant teachers were duly notified. Moreover, affected pages were locked as a precaution, whereas unaffected ones were left untouched. Steps are being taken to ensure that the problem is closed, and it is regretted that any inconvenience has been caused.

B. Personal version
Honestly, what happened was this: on Tuesday our website suddenly went down and nobody could open it. We think a wrong setting caused it. We spotted it fast and fixed it within an hour, then told our teacher straight away. We locked the pages that were hit and left the rest alone, and now we're sorting out the cause. I'm really sorry for the worry this caused.

C. Reflection
The two versions carry an identical incident, yet their voice could not differ more. The impersonal one leans on agentless passives ("pages were locked", "steps are being taken") and impersonal openers ("it has been established"), which foreground objectivity but quietly obfuscate who forgot to check the setting. The active version restores accountability by naming us as the agent; its warmth would be far too personal for an official record, whereas the detachment of the first would feel evasive to a friend.
Ünite 11 · Passive & Impersonality · Bölüm 6/6

Unit Check (Ünite Kontrolü)

Mixed questions from the whole unit, then check what you can do.

Mixed Quiz (Karışık Test)

14 questions: grammar + vocabulary + reading + practice. Each question is marked instantly.

Can-Do Check (Yapabiliyorum Listesi)

Tick what you can do now. Honest answers help your teacher.

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